五年級上冊英語作文點評
五年級上冊英語作文
1. My Favourite FoodDo you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Gueagain! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
2.In The KitchenThis is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.
【要領(lǐng)點評】
這篇作文的題目是“在廚房”里，作者根據(jù)自己家的廚房情況，五年級上冊英語作文。介紹廚房里有微波爐和電爐，有一張大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及媽媽在做飯，非常真實。
小朋友們，可以從觀察自己身邊的事、物寫起，利用所學的句子，描述身邊熟悉的東西來訓練習作，五年級作文大全《五年級上冊英語作文》。
2.My Favourite Teacher
My favouritr teacher is MiWang.She is my English teacher.She is tall ang fat.She is active .Her cleis fun.I like MiWang.
翻譯:我最喜愛的老師
我最喜愛的老師是王小姐。 她是我的英語老師。他又高又胖。她很活躍。她的.課很有趣。我喜歡王小姐。
my father
My father is a manage.He has black fair and big eyes.He likes apples,because he thinks it is good.He is good at swimming.So I like swimming too!
我的爸爸
我的爸爸是一名經(jīng)理。他有一頭黑色的頭發(fā)和一雙大眼睛。他喜歡蘋果,因為他認為它營養(yǎng)好。他擅長游泳。所以我也喜歡游泳。
My mother is a teacher in my school.She has black curly hair. She looks very beautiful.She likes eating carrot because she thinks it's good for our health.And I love her.
我的媽媽是我們學校的一名教師。他有著黑色的卷發(fā)。他看起來很漂亮,他喜歡吃胡蘿卜因為他認為那對我們的健康十分有益。我愛她。
On my vacation,I helped my mother do the chores ,do the dishes and sweep the floor.I went to beijing to visited my aunt.Beijing is beautiful.The weather was sunny.I saw the Great Wall.And I was exciting.Oh,I have a wonderful vacation!
在我的假期里,我?guī)椭鷭寢屪黾覄?洗碗,掃地。我們?nèi)チ吮本┛次业墓霉�。北京很漂亮。那里天氣晴朗。我看到了長城,我很激動。哦,我有一個精彩的假期
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