Xi Yuan-曦園
中國作文網(wǎng)（deadspacehorror.com）原創(chuàng)整理的 > 大學(xué)英語作文 Getting to know the state of Xi Yuan is like having a taste of Fudan on a smaller scale due to the many different landscapes to be found here.
Nestled in the center of Xi Yuan, the Lotus Pond, an area of breathtaking beauty made up of concrete bed, liquid water and leaves, bears a resemblance to the elegant one described by Zhu Ziqing. Here and there, layers of leaves over the water are dotted with white lotus blossom, some in full bloom, others in shy bud. Around the pond, far and near, high and low, are trees,through which stretches a winding white stone path. Everywhere, exclusive and elaborate planting emphasized the feeling that you are entering a new world peaceful and secluded learing the normal world behind.
In the daytime, Xi Yuan is frequented by hardworking students, while birds high up on the trees serenade the clouds with their melody. At night, the branches of the trees moved in the wind. The moonlight filtering through makes a dappled，shifting pattern. Xi Yuan looks most charming in early spring,the air chilly and damp, especially when inundated with thinmist.
Xi Yuan is such an attractive place. You can hardly afford to miss it if you have a visit to Fudan.
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本文屬于寫景散文。復(fù)旦大學(xué)校園可以描寫的景象不勝枚舉，而本文作者沒有描繪其他地方，而是選擇了復(fù)旦校園一個幽僻的角落。這里綠樹、池塘及小路構(gòu)成了一片詩情畫意，為作者提供了描述素材。
立意明確、層次分明是本文的最大特點。文章的描寫顯得錯落有致。作者一開始便說明曦園是復(fù)旦校園的`一個縮影。然后在描述景致的時候以池塘為中心展開畫筆。先寫池塘中水、落葉及荷花，然后再寫遠近高低的樹木，彎彎曲曲的小路。最后，作者又著意刻畫曦園在不同季節(jié)呈現(xiàn)出的迷人景色。
當(dāng)然，文章還有許多不足之處。譬如，在第一段里，作者沒有說明曦園在哪一方面能夠代表復(fù)旦校園；對于朱自清的“荷塘月色”作者也只是一筆帶過，沒有說明曦園同朱自清筆下的荷塘有何相似之處。如果作者的筆觸能夠再細膩一些，描述能夠再詳細一些，文章就會增添一分閑情雅致。另外，部分句法和用詞也破壞了文章整體的美感。但是，瑕不掩瑜。作為一篇習(xí)作，本文仍不失其清閑雋永。
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