Flowers In Greenhouse溫室的花朵
Vigorously and prosperously, a flower is blooming in a greenhouse in spite of the horrible thunderstorm outside. Without the shelter, however, it can hardly survive the heavy weather for even a while. The purpose of the cartoonist is to throw out a hot social issue nowadays about the negative influence on the doted caring (dote是不及物動詞,它的'形容詞是dotey,你要想表達“溺愛”用它的名詞dotage,這句話用了定語從句修飾issue,感覺沒有必要) .
The single child is often over-protected so that he or she, like the delicate plant brought up in a comfort and warm house in the portrayal, is completely separated from the real complicated society (epitomise是“體現(xiàn)”、“象征”的意思,想表達“真實的、復雜的社會”還是用complicated或者complex). Under the circumstance, the stress of competition and peer pressure would arouse a great many of problems. On the one hand, they may not be able to deal with affairs for their (for后面是要加從句的,而且是用逗號和前面隔開,想表達“歸因于”可考慮用owing to the) lack of practical experience. On the other hand, highly-pressed life could also be followed by psychology related defection.(原創(chuàng)作文投稿中國作文網(wǎng) www. sanwen .com)
Thus, due attention should be paid to this universal phenomenon. As the old saying goes,"Adversity leads to prosperity." Elder members of the family ought to courage the adolescents to steel themselves instead of being unnecessarily protected.Only in this way can we assure them a brighter future and a better life.
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