高二英語作文專題訓(xùn)練
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20XX年央視春晚的廣告收入創(chuàng)新高，但節(jié)目中的植入廣告引發(fā)了熱議。最近，某網(wǎng)站舉行了一次題為“對今年春晚植入廣告的態(tài)度”的調(diào)查，請根據(jù)以下餅圖（pie chart）所示信息用英語寫一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。
注意：
1．對所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。
2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
3．植入廣告：product placement
Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.
The opinions on this topic vary from person to person. One in four think there is so much of product placement that lots of people feel unsatisfied when they watch the programmes. And 10% of the people think product placement in the programmes greatly ruins the image of CCTV, beause it will leave a bad impression on audience in and outside China. Besides, nearly one third of the people hold the opinion that it’s hard to relate the product placement to the programmes, making the audience feel uncomfortable.
However, there are 15% of the people who think it is helpful for the development of CCTV. And the rest think there is no need for us to be so strict with product placement. After all, it’s very natural.
Personally, the product placement is really disgusting and CCTV should try to avoid it.
本文總體結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，作者通過整合拼圖，談?wù)搶Υ龔V告的兩大觀點，最后陳述自己的觀點，除此之外，作者在選詞造句上也下了一番工夫。在開頭，中間以及最后的結(jié)尾處，優(yōu)美、地道的句式層出不窮，一些高級詞匯相互響應(yīng)，熠熠生輝，值得其他學(xué)生借鑒。
The 20XXSpring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.
According to the pie chart, we can see 15% of the surveyed people think it’s difficult to develop CCTV without the product placement, because it can provide enough money. At the same time, 20% of them think the product placement is presented in the progamme in a natural way.
On the other hand, the rest of the people are against the move and they have their own reasons. Nearly one third of them say the product placement has little to do with the programmes, which reduces their interests in the programmes. And 10% of the people hold the idea that the disadvantage that it ruins the image of CCTV outweighs its advantage. Besides, a quarter complain there are too much product placement in the programmes.
As far as I’m concerned, even if it’s common to see product placement, I don’t think it should appear in some programmes of art and culture.
本文反映出作者對英文寫作極強的駕馭能力，首先作者能夠很好地審題，通過圖表找準信息，并且將文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排地很合理，讓讀者一目了然，再次，作者在語言方面極具天賦，從開始的一個without的強調(diào)句，到非限制性定語從句，及后來 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.
As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programmes naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.
However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programmes. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.
From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audience’s feelings into account.
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你班同學(xué)開展了一場“司機醉駕是否應(yīng)該處罰乘客”的討論。請你根據(jù)下表提
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.
A small part of the students approve of it for the reason that on one hand, this punishment can decrease the amount of the traffic accidents. On the other hand, it can improve the safety of passengers and drivers. Besides, avoiding riding in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only responsible for us, but also for the driver and pedestrians.
However, the majority of the students are strongly against this punishment in that they think it hard for passengers to judge whether the driver has drunk or not. What’s more, even the passengers know the driver has drunk, if the driver doesn’t accept their advice, it’s unfair to punish the passengers.
Personally, I think people who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished because the public’s safety is the most important.
作者分三個段落來完成此篇書面表達，先說明少數(shù)人贊成的觀點，接著說明多數(shù)人反對的觀點，最后給出作者自己的觀點，并說明理由。結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點全面，作者觀點鮮明，理由具有說服力。文章中作者使用了大量的高級詞匯和高級結(jié)構(gòu)，為文章增添了色彩。on one hand, on the other hand, besides, however, what’s more, personally等過渡詞增強了文章的流暢性。
I’m writing to you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.
The minority of the students who are for the idea think that it can reduce traffic accidents and promote the safety of traffic. They also think avoiding taking a car driven by a drunken driver is an activity responsible for passengers and the driver and other people on the road as well.
On the contrary, the majority of the students are opposed to it. The first reason they give lies in that passengers have difficulty finding whether a driver is drunken. Apart from that, even if passengers know that the driver is drunken, it is unfair to punish them when the driver doesn’t take their suggestion seriously.
In my view, it’s traffic security that greatly matters and we
should punish those drunken drivers rather than the passengers.
該文的最大亮點是多處使用的復(fù)雜句式，體現(xiàn)作者嫻熟的語言表達技巧。Be opposed to, take…seriously等高級短語的使用亦為文章增添了色彩。過渡詞on the contrary, apart from, even if, in view, and等使用較為考究。綜合全文的這些特點，該理應(yīng)為一篇優(yōu)秀作文。
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.
The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety. Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers but also for the driver and other people on the road.
The majority of the students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not. What’s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice.
As far as I am concerned, punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but also hard to carry out.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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北京大學(xué)2010年將試行由中學(xué)校長實名推薦的招生改革。被推薦的學(xué)生高考成績可獲得30分的加分。2009年11月16日北大公布了39所有推薦資格的`中學(xué)名單。北大這一舉措在全國引起了一場激烈的爭論。請根據(jù)以下要點給《中國日報》寫一
will eoll students recommended by high school principals this years. The recommended students will have an extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam scores. Peking University’s move has set off a nationwide debate.
On the one hand, some people in favor of it think there is no doubt that Peking University’s move is a bold attempt of reforming the educational system. In addition, it is also a guarantee for outstanding students or those gifted in some aspects that they have a chance to be admitted into first-class universities. Besides, this move will encourage the middle schools to pay more attention to the all-round development of the students.
On the other hand, some think there are a lot of disadvantages of this move. First chances are that some students try to cheat because 30 points is a great lure for them. Also,
it is unfair for most students in many other schools.
Personally, we should balance its advantages against its disadvantages. It is the college entrance examination that decides students’ future to a large extent. So I don’t think it’s a good idea or policy.
文章三段式寫作，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，文章中大量地使用了一些高級詞匯如：reform, guarantee, be admitted into 和balance…against等，另外，最后一段的精心安排。
will eoll students recommended by high school principals this years. The recommended students will have an extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam scores. Peking University’s move has set off a nationwide debate.
Supporters hold the opinion that by doing this Peking university attempts to reform the current university entrance system bravely. In addition, the policy can make sure that the students who have good qualities or special talents will be eolled by first-class universities. What’s more, it’s also an effective measure to drive high schools to focus on the students’ all-round development.
On the contrary, there is another voice. These objectors argue that there is no point in carrying out the policy. Firstly, it may lead to cheating. Besides, it’s against the principle that the universities entrance exam is held on an equal basis. So it’s unfair to other students. And they think there is no need to give extra scores to the recommended students, most of whom are excellent students.
From my point of view, I think it’s well worth having a try. After all, it’s a great leap in reforming the current university entrance system.
讀完此篇作文，心中不禁感嘆作者良好的英語語言駕馭能力，作者在文中簡約有序地組織表達了所有的內(nèi)容要點，用詞精確謹慎，所選句式難易交錯，固定句式及地道的短語賦予了文章別樣的風(fēng)采，在文末水到渠成地用了一句it’s well worth表達了自己的觀點，精彩圓滿地完成了寫作目標。
University will eoll students recommended by high school principals this year. The recommended students will have an extra 30 points added to their national college entrance exam scores. Peking University’s move has set off a nationwide debate.
Some people approve of this move. They think this is the bold attempt Peking University has made at reforming the current university entrance system. This move provides quality students and students talented in certain subjects with an opportunity to enter first-class universities and ensure that they aren’t overlooked simply because of their performance in the national university entrance exam. Meanwhile, it will push high schools to pay more attention to the students’ all-round development.
However, quite a few people object to the move. Firstly, it many lead to cheating. Secondly, only 39 schools are qualified to recommend students, which is unfair to so many schools across the country. Thirdly, there is no point giving extra scores to those recommended students, for they are mostly top students and have no problem entering
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