六年級英語作文:植樹的經(jīng)歷
Planting Trees
Its spring. Its time to plant trees.
I want to plant a tree in our garden. Dad and Mum are very happy. They like green. Dad helps me plant the tree. First, we dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I water it. I am so excited and I wait for the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. Now it has lots of leaves. It grows fast. We should plant more trees. They make our world beautiful.
【要領(lǐng)點評】
小作者寫了一次植樹的經(jīng)歷,但他并沒有單純拘泥于植樹的過程。既有過程,也有感覺,能使文章打動讀者,給人以啟發(fā)。作文的`最后一段就非常好,兩句話勝似千言萬語。我們可以學習一下這種寫法。 既描述過程,又適時提自己的看法或想法的寫法,在作文中叫做夾敘夾議,描述過程為了提出一種思想服務,提出看法或想法使原本平實的描述有了意義。我們在以后的寫作中也可以試一試。
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