Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
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題目：Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
舒瑤（12班）
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the eekend . There are t o different vie points about it.
Some people think that it is necessary .First , they can learn better ith the help of the teachers than by themselves. Second , they can strengthen hat they learn in class. Third , they can get more useful things in those classes.
Ho ever , other people insist that it is not necessary. For one thing, students ill not listen carefully in their normal classes if they can get the same kno ledge in training classes. For another thing, most senior students haven’t enough time to rest . What’s orse, the purpose of most of the training classes and family teachers is to earn money.
In my opinion, a training class or family teacher is not necessary. We can study ell at school if e ork hard.
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穎 (7班)
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the eekend. There are t o different vie points about it.
Some people think that a training class or family teacher is quite necessary. Follo ing a teacher is al ays better than self study. For one thing, it can strengthen the kno ledge in class, for another, students can learn more.
But some other people think it is unnecessary to have classes like this. Firstly, students may easily get into the habit of depending on others. Secondly, holiday is time for rest, students can’t keep studying ithout any rest. And hat’s more, most training classes and family teachers are in the purpose of making money. Students can’t get good education in such classes.
In my opinion, different students have different situation. If a student is not good at self study, maybe a training class is fit for him. But if a student think that he could trust himself, he ill never need it.
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雷洋 ( 21 班 )
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the eekend. There are t o different vie points about it.
Some people think that it’s necessary to go to training classes or have family teachers. In their opinions, follo ing the teachers’ instructions is more helpful than self study. For one thing, students may strengthen hat they have learned in class; for another, they can study much more from the teacher.
Ho ever, other people think that it’s not necessary to do so, because depending on teachers is a bad habit. Besides, students should have time to take a rest and quite a lot of teachers in training classes are not strict ith the students. They just care about the money that ill go to their pocket.
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