小學(xué)英語(yǔ)作文：Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這一篇寫(xiě)愛(ài)好的文章,小作者的`寫(xiě)作思路很值得我們學(xué)習(xí),他沒(méi)有具體寫(xiě)到劉瑩的某一種愛(ài)好,而是從學(xué)習(xí)到課余的多種愛(ài)好入手,對(duì)劉瑩的各種愛(ài)好進(jìn)行了粗線條地勾畫(huà).從愛(ài)好這個(gè)角度來(lái)看劉瑩的話，我們會(huì)覺(jué)得這個(gè)形象很飽滿。
小朋友們寫(xiě)這種敘事寫(xiě)人作文時(shí)，可以從兩個(gè)角度下手：一是具體地描繪;二是和上面小朋友一樣，粗線條地勾畫(huà)，二者各有所長(zhǎng)，另處在行文中使用一些問(wèn)句，使用一些轉(zhuǎn)述的話，可以使作文更有靈氣，避免了平鋪直敘的缺點(diǎn)。比如上文的Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt.和she says her hobbies make her happy.就是十分不錯(cuò)的句子，使讀者眼前為之一亮。
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