對工作的選擇作文之

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對工作的選擇作文之范文

　　題目：My Choice for Job

對工作的選擇作文之范文

　　寫作要求

　　A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries. Some people choose higher-paying jobs while others would rather take up lower-paying job with short hours. Which one would you choose when you graduate?

　　Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

　　My Choice for Job

　　You are to write in three parts.

　　In the ? rst part, state speci? cally what your idea is.

　　In the second part, provide reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.

　　In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

　　Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

　　審題思路

　　本題是一道個人觀點表達(dá)型的題目，表明自己會選擇什么類型的工作：高薪但工作時間長的工作還是低薪但工作時間短的工作。在寫法上，應(yīng)該是先做出選擇，然后給出理由：

　　1. 如果選擇高薪，理由可以寫：⑴ 高薪通常意味著高難度，應(yīng)勇于接受挑戰(zhàn) ；⑵ 趁年輕，為未來做累積……

　　2. 如果選擇低薪，理由可以寫：⑴ 錢不是萬能的，身體健康更重要；⑵ 工作不應(yīng)是生活的全部，只有休息得好才能工作得更好 ……

　　范文賞析

　　My Choice for Job

　　Work is an important part of people’s life as they have to devote their prime time to it. What kind of job to choose has therefore aroused heated discussion. Some people favor higher-paying jobs with longer work time, but others, in contrast, think otherwise . In my view, I will choose a lower- paying one for the following reasons.

　　引言部分：作者先說明工作很重要，因此選擇什么樣的工作是個熱議的話題。在給出兩種不同的觀點后，作者給出了自己的觀點：選擇低薪但工作時間短的工作。

　　One important reason is that money is not that all-mighty and doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being. It’s true that money can buy a lot of things, yet it can not replace the feelings when we are with our families and friends which requires more time. If we work longer hours and spare little and even no time for our aging parents, we will regret for our rest life when they are gone.

　　Another equally important factor that supports my choice is my belief that health is more important than work and money. The jobs that pay well tend to be high-demanding and require full devotion. In other words, health is sacrificed as they have little, if any, time for exercises or even normal meals. As a result, people may suffer from various diseases and even die young from overwork, as is reported in many newspapers.

　　主體部分：在主體部分里，作者給出了兩個理由說明自己的選擇：錢不是萬能的，與家人朋友相處很重要；健康更重要。這里主要運用的論述手法是邏輯推理、正反論述、舉例說明，論述手法的多樣性增強了文章的說服力，使文章更為緊湊。

　　To sum up, money and work are important, but they are not as important as health and time with one’s families and friends. Therefore, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.

　　總結(jié)部分：作者先概述了上面所給出的`理由，然后用therefore自然地重申了自己的觀點。

　　亮點回放

　　1. prime time: “黃金時段” ；此處還可以使用golden age來替換。

　　2. favor: “偏愛，支持” ；在這里表示選擇工作，與下文的choose ，take up為近義詞。

　　3. higher-paying: “高薪的” ；a higher-paying j ob與下文的a j ob that pays well為近義詞，相對應(yīng) 的反義詞為a lower-paying j ob和a j ob that pays less。

　　4. think otherwise: “不這樣認(rèn)為” ；比同學(xué)們常用的have other/different/various opinions要更為簡練。

　　5. all-mighty: “萬能的” ；此處近義詞為omnipotent ，powerful ，influential等。

　　6. ensure: “確�！� ；注意與insure ，assure和reassure的區(qū)別。

　　7. spare: “抽出（時間、精力等）” ，表示這個意思時，常用搭配為spare time for sb. （抽出時間陪某人）。

　　8. aging: “變老的” ；比簡單使用old更能體現(xiàn)變老這個過程。

　　9. high-demanding: “高要求的” ；此處可以使用challenging來代替。

　　10. in other words: “換句話說” ；也可以使用to put it in another way來代替。